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Example 1

A grammatical mistake in a nonsensical sentence. Too bad, because there’s a real message in there!

Example 2

Clumsy phrasing and we say ‘grape harvest’, or ‘grape crush’ to avoid a repeat of ‘harvesting’.

Example 3

Poor use of the definite article and a grammatical mistake (amongst other inaccuracies) make this painful to read.

Example 4

Middle bond? Apart from cloddish English , the use of the to-infinitive leaves to be desired. A pity!

Example 5

It’s ‘above’ sea level, and ‘variegated’ is used for a spectrum of colours – not smells.

Georges Meekers

Member Circle of Wine Writers (UK)

Wine Pro | Marketer | Wine, Drinks & Lifestyle Writer